the room is empty
seven months gone
of fractured promise
it’s not the first
be the last
even as a boy
Pure and to the bittersweet point. Hugs.
Thank you Ray - I'm glad you enjoyed
Perfectly written....heartbreaking. ((hugs) from me too.
Thank you Charlotte - for the comment and the hugs
Strong slicing emotions - the ultimate fear of being left. Sharp clean rhetoric
Thank you Eloise - much appreciated
Awe this makes me very sad if I think this is what this poem is about? Xxoo
It's just a poem Steph - but thanks for the thought
It's moving heartbreaking , not fair! I have a problem with justice.., it is not fair to meet wrong people to destroy you!
It's never easy, unless its your idea and you make the first moves.
I was interested in conveying the emotion - that strange sense of deja vous when confronted with loss Cal.
You've expressed it well. I felt the sinking feeling too.
Thank you Cal